Naam se tere yara
Naam se tere yara
Screenplay
Scene 1 ( interior ) props : bed , chakku , live fb mobile , ringlight , photo of rishabh n dani selfie
Rishabh apni gf Dani ko chakku se maarta hai dani bed par girti hai rishabh zorr se chillata hai
" pyaar mei dhokha bardaasht nahi hota " ----( internal pain )
Knife with blood reference video
Dani jo bhot pain mei hai rishabh ki taraf dekhti hai toh apna dard bhool jati hai aur pyaar se rishabh ko bulati hai gale lagne ke liye - aur rishabh girr padta hai dani par phir kehta hai ....
Boy falls on girl reference video
" jisse hota hai na usse mujh jaisa pyaar nahi hota "
Dani hugs rishabh aur dum Todd deti hai
https://youtu.be/3jiTx90WCB8?si=so5_OaXf9pe7May1 ( reference video )
Rishabh dani ke baju mei baith jata hai gehri saans leta hai koi regret nahi hai ... background mei song bajta hai ----- naam se tere yara hum jaane jayenge ; rishabh uthta hai fb live off karta hai
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Statutory warning : pyaar mei dhokha sehat ke liye hanikarak hai isme jaan bhi ja sakti hai "
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Scene starts with rishabh lying on a rock alone in forest or near sea shore cigarette in his mouth and tries to light it with two stones thrashing them with each other tries 4 to 5 times it Doesn't light so closes eyes and
Cut to ...
Scene 2 interior ( day ) props : photo of Indian air force , table chairs , study table
Rishabh jd and shree standing and looking at the poster of Indian air force , they want to become fighter pilot from the poster one fighter plane goes in air and three friends shown in ground making strategy like cricket players before fielding they run exercise we show them in three split screens then we show through camera all activities like running study happening in that poster while they watching poster together, they study together wake up early running in morning doing exercise prepping for nda
Scene 3 interior morning
Rishabh jd and shree sleeping together alarm rings its 4 am rishabh and jd getting ready for running we show montages of drinking raw egg someone brushing someone drinking water changing clothes getting ready for running .
jd ko dono Bari Bari se uthane ki koshish karte hain lekin jd karwat badalkar so jata hai rishabh aur jd dono ek doosre ko dekhte hain phir jd ka haath panv pakadkar seedha ground mei le jakar Lita dete hain
Scene 5 exterior ground
wahan ground mei jd mast soya hua hai dheere dheere uski aankh khulti hai baaju mei pani bottle hai opens cap drink water aur wo idhar udhar dekhta hai ... usse dhoondhle dhoondhle do log uski taraf aate hue dikhte hain jd aankh meechta hai toh pata chalta hai ki ye toh iske dost hain dono door se hanste aa rhe hain phir jd ko kuch samajh nahi aata hai gussa kare ki kya kare kya bole phir thodi derr baad wo bhi Hasne lagta hai rishabh aur shree haath dete hai jd bhi haath deta hai style mei dono usse uthate hain teeno ek saath apne kapde jhadte hain
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Teeno slow motion mei mast stylish kapdon mei walk karte hain , bike chala rhe hain , masti kar rhe hain
three guys walking in style jd centre mei hai goggle nikalta hai style mei pehen leta hai shree ek taraf se jd ke aankh se goggle nikalkar khud pehen leta hai then jd again doosra goggle nikalkar pehen leta hai aur phir rishabh uss side se uske aankh se nikalkar pehen leta hai jd ko gussa aata hai and he runs 🏃♀️ to beat them freeze
Freeze shot of three friends reference pic
Then we show them all standing together looking at sea and we dissolve the shot from first shot where they were in room looking towards banner of Indian air force
Reference of friends sitting together and dreaming of Indian air force
Scene 6
Jd shree and rishabh teeno ek line mei hain aapas mei race laga rhe 1 , 2 tab tak ek ladki udhar se aati hui dikhti hai rishabh se aankhein takrati hai aur smile karti hai shree 3 bolkar daudne lagta hai thodi derr baad dekhta hai toh rishabh nahi dikhta wo dikhta hai uss ladki ke saath opposite direction mei Daudte hue .
Reference video of boy n girl meet for first time
Scene 7
girl and rishabh walking together
, girl is saying something boy looks at her from left side then goes to right side girl asks what happened boy says nothing carry on and girl keeps speaking then boy goes front and walks in opposite direction , girl says kya hai ye ?
Boy smiles and shows sign whatever u spoke I didn't listen anything but ur face is beautiful girl feels little shy but become angry and goes away
girl is sitting alone hand on cheek looking at sea shore other hand down
boy comes and sits next to him silently says nothing boy slowly moves his little finger and touches girls little finger , girl holds tight n doesn't remove boy gets green signal of girl coming close
Both looking towards sea doesn't react whereas their body feel the touch of their fingers boy removes his finger and thinks something and stands infront of girl , girl looks at boy what he is doing ? Boy pulls his heart and throws towards girl girl catches heart boy asks for hug
and girl smiles and goes for hug she hugs from side normal hug boy smiles but not satisfied and turns away
then girl understands and pulls boys hand hug becomes tight ...
we take a rolling shot up in air of girl and boy
Reference video of girl n boy rolling in air
montages with different costumes high speed shots of girl n boy doing salsa steps holding each other doing salsa dance step in different costumes slow motion , boy chilling and dancing with girls ....
Girl n boy dance salsa steps montages
they walking on road , they walking in night holding hand
suddenly boy realizes girl is in right boy quickly stands in her left and vehicle crosses girl feels so good and looks at boy
she is standing and staring at boy for boy to to look back boy moves front and realizes girl is standing behind boy asks what ? Why u behind standing ? Girl pulls her heart throws at boy and boy catches girl asks for hug . Camera pulls out
Scene : rishabh comes home jd and shree studying
Shree : tere dad ka call aaya tha
Rishabh : achha kya bol rhe the ?
Shree : bol rhe the beta padhai par dhyaan dena har ladki ko achha kamane wala husband chahiye bf toh ye nikammon ko hi banati hai time pass ke liye
Jd smiles
Rishabh : kuch jalne ki boo aa rhi jd zara dekh kuch jal toh nahi rha ...
Jd - kuch jal to nahi rha lekin baat mei dum toh hai ladkiyan bf toh sirf nikammon ko hi banati hai ..... ha ha ha jd and shree laughs
Rishabh -haan chal chal abhi padhai kar ( irritating way )
We show montages of everyone studying
All three standing in same position as in the start they looking at hoarding of Indian air force
Jd : yaar kal cds written ka result hai bhot darr lag rha ..
shree looks at jd
jo hoga dekha jayega
rishabh doesn't say anything
Scene
Rishabh and girl sitting at the same place where they used to sit
Yaar kal cds written ka result hai bhot darr lag rha ...
Girl : isme darna kya hai ? Fail hue toh restart waise bhi tumhare iss exam mei tum paas ho ya fail mai tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakti lekin mai tumhe life ke exam mei kabhi fail nahi hone doongi , I am with you in your success n failure I promise .
Rishabh feels elevated
Rishabh and dani walking on the street they not holding each other hand girl slowly herself holds rishabh hand little finger the way rishabh holded her little finger for the first time they walk suddenly a car comes from opposite direction this time girl goes from left to right to protect boy we show this just to make him feel now she is around boy to protect whenever he fails rishabh says nothing just a small smile . Girl pinches rishabh and hugs n pulls tight from left his left hand .
Scene 8
Rishabh gets scolding from his dad on call , phone call hangs and then rishabh yells lifts table fan In anger and about to throw jd enters and looks at rishabh they both look at each other and they both sit silently they both failed
Shree enters with sweet and dancing loudly jd and rishabh eats sweet and looks at shree who is dancing they both stand goes near shree who dancing and yells together " hattttt " jd turns 360 degree ye kya hua " saale jalankhor " mithai ka dabba kholta hai doosri taraf dekhte hue haath pherta hai dekhta hai kuch nahi hai .
Scene 9
Rishabh sitting alone throwing pebbles in sea senses girl came and sat next to her
Rishabh - yaar mai fail ho gya
Turns around to see no one is around him
gets message
I am going out on holiday trip at dehradun with my family for 2 to 3 days " miss you "
Rishabh doesn't respond
Scene 10
Rishabh sleeping it's night not able to sleep properly suddenly beep beep sound in mobile rishabh gets pics and videos of girl getting physical with another boy pics and video he starts remembering that he has seen this boy somewhere he realizes the very first day when he touched dani for first time with hi finger sitting at beach she got a call from where it was showing freddy with same guy pic which he received on wtsapp remembered his name freddy quickly checked danis fb profile and found freddy in her friend list and his residence location was also dehradun
Reference video of macro lense for clarity of fb n location
and rishabh realizes ohh this girl was cheating on her
Suddenly tears come out panics ( line pops out on screen - aajkal ladkiyaan sirf timepass ke liye bf banati hai , casual love , you are a timepass , pyaar ishq aur dhokha )
Reference video of text on screen
Quickly goes in washroom and cries closing his mouth so that no one hears panics a lot splashes water on face
Goes out he wants to hurt himself thinks of calling then doesn't call her sometimes punches on wall or tree to hurt himself panics goes mad yells loud without voice then to hurt himself he starts running running and running
Reference video of boy running to give himself physical pain so that mental pain calms down
He runs runs n runs n finally exhausts takes deep breath three to four times and lies down on road
Reference video of boy lying on road alone with no fear of getting hurt badly
We put camera in steady mode suddenly a car Tyre comes in screen n few drops of mud n water splashes on rishabh face and he wakes up
Cut to same from starting shot
We show two parallel shots running one is boy wakes up from stone and sits
Goes home says friends I am going home town for few days will be back soon ... a car with driver is waiting outside put his luggage waves bye and leaves
In the other shot parallel we show rishabh walking towards his hotel where he is staying opens and we see same bag 🎒 this shows he is right now in hotel
Rishabh doesn't react goes to bed now he is used to all this
in between girl is back in town she calls rishabh rishabh doesn't answer .....
rishabh doesn't answers she calls every morning and night but he doesn't responds .all three calling one by one but he doesn't answers anyone
Scene 11
Rishabh deletes all pic from mobile except one ... and decides to go back to his friends rishabh packs his bag and after some time of travel
car crosses a restaurant rishabh suddenly saw shree and dani sitting together
rishabh watches shree and dani together and shree puts hand on dani shoulder rishabh imagines what she said in imagination once u are a looser rishabh asks driver to turn around comes back to his old place where he was living throws bag and shouts
Shouts puts hand on bed tries to lift in anger we show camera rolling from left to right fast on trolley to catch his emotions .
Reference video of arc shot
Rishabh apne dono haathon ko zor se bed par maarta hai n
Cut to
From same hand shot we see rishabh on terrace
Scene 12 ( exterior )
Hotel ka balcony or terrace wahan khada aasmaan ki taraf dekhta hai aur chillata hai " o hello agar mai yahan se kood jaun na saari problem door ho jayegi ( points towards his brain ) kisiko meri yahan zaroorat nahi hai ..... and reminisces/ remembers shockingly 1 2 and 3 different failures .
Eye movement to show rishabh failure one by one
( 1. Jab wo ladki ke saath tha love failure
( 2. Friends uske saath jo daud rhe the wo aage nikal gaye ye peeche reh gaya
( 3. Father yelling
Reference video of failure
Phir jaldi se phone nikalta hai ...
Types message : let's meet today at my old bunglow ( " dani " ko message kar rha )
Reply received : ok
Scene 13 boy in room dressed nicely looks at pic kept on wall he has put dani pic on wall knife in hand which opens on button closes n opens closes n opens has put his mobile on ringlight bell rings folds knife keeps on table ons his fb live girl enters boy dance with girl same old dance girl hugs boy boy doesn't hug tight girl holds boys hand and dircts to hug her properly finally boy smiles and hugs her they dance the way they used to
In between hug all old painful memories pops up
Pulls knife and stabs
and kills girls
Cut to same from start ...
Rishabh apni gf Dani ko chakku se maarta hai dani bed par girti hai rishabh zorr se chillata hai
" pyaar mei dhokha bardaasht nahi hota " ----( internal pain )
Dani jo bhot pain mei hai rishabh ki taraf dekhti hai toh apna dard bhool jati hai she understood why this happened....
aur pyaar se rishabh ko bulati hai gale lagne ke liye ...
rishabh dani ko dekhta hai aansoon nikalte hain usse wo mooh pherr leta hai phir dani usse un dono ke signature signal se bulati hai ( mime karte hue dani apna dil nikalti hai rishabh ki taraf phenkti hai aur rishabh girr padta hai dani par phir kehta hai ....
" jisse hota hai na usse mujh jaisa pyaar nahi hota "
Dani remembers what she said - mai tumhe life ke exam mei fail nahi hone doongi tear drops
Dani hugs rishabh aur dum Todd deti hai
Rishabh dani ke baju mei baith jata hai gehri saans leta hai koi regret nahi hai ... background mei song bajta hai ----- naam se tere yara hum jaane jayenge ; rishabh uthta hai fb live off karta hai
Scene 14
Washes hand and imagines his friends walking towards him and asking loudly
Rishabh imagines two friends coming towards him
Shree : tuney isse maar diya ?
Jd : areey pagal ho gya hai kya ?
Shree : kyon maar diya ?
Jd : bewkoof saale
Shree : bol kyon mara bol kyon mara ?
Jd and shree shouts bol bol bol ...
Rishabh : haaan haan Maine isse maar diya kyonki na mai chain se jee paa rha tha aur na hi chain se mar pa rha tha sote jaagte uthte baithte har samay wo aur uski bewafai mujhe satati rehti thi isliye Maine usse maar diya
.......
Jd : bichari
Rishabh : bichari ??? Kaun bichari .... hatt ye koi bichari Wishari nahi hai Maine isse ek jhatke mei maar diya ye sabko dikh gya isliye ye sabki nazaron mei bichari ho gayi , aur ye jo mujhe roz tadpa tadpa kar marr rahi thi , mentally pagal kar diya tha mujhe , zinda laash bana diya tha bhoot ki tarah bhatak rha tha wo kisi ko nahi dikha . Ye bichari aur mai murderer , isko maarne se pehle mai khud andar se na Jane kab ka marr chuka tha ...
sunn uss bichari ke hamdard ....
Mai usse maarna nahi chahta tha mai usse door jana chahta tha Maine bhot koshish ki mai isse door chala jaun iske baare mei na sochun isse yaad na karun lekin jitna mai isse door jaane ki koshish karta tha utna hi wo mere aankhon ke saamne aakar naachne lagti thi looser looser kehkar mujhpar hansti thi toh bass Maine usse maar diya
Lekin mere iss gunaah mei mai akela Zimmedar nahi hoon mere saath wo ladki barabari ki hissedaar hai usne mere dil aur dimaag ko itna uksaya ki dil bhool gya ye kabhi usse pyaar bhi karta tha aur dimaag ne thaan li isko maarkar hi moksh hai ...
Nainam chiddanti shastrani nainam dahati pawakah
.....
Rishabh gets back to his consciousness and door knocks loudly and shree enters girl is lying on bed with blood shree goes near
Shree : dekh iski saans abhi bhi chal rhi hai let's take her to hospital.
Rishabh : ruk tu bhi isse Marta hua dekh Taki mere Marne ke baad tu sabko bata sake pyaar ka khel sehat ke liye hanikarak hai isme jaan bhi ja sakti hai aur waise tu kyon itna phadphada rha kahi tu bhi to iske pyaar mei .... and gives a cunning smile
Shree : achha toh tujhe pata chala gya hai mere aur iske baare mei matlab hamare pyaar ke baare mei and shows his mobile which contains pics n video of dani and shree
Rishabh quickly turns around and asks
Band kar ye hata meri nazron se mera dum ghut rha hai
Shree : nahi hataya to kya mujhe bhi maar dega , kahan tha peechle 8 Dino se jab ye tujhe back to back call kar rahi thi ...
Rishabh : haan toh Maine phone nahi uthaya toh tu mil gya na iss hawas ki pujari ka hawas mitane ke liye
Shree slaps rishabh
Shree - pichle 8 din se ye back to back call kar rhi thi kyonki isse koi iska fb friend ai ( artificial intelligence) ki madad se iska porn video banakr isse blackmail kar rha tha ye baat ye sabse pehle tujhe batana chahti thi lekin tu available hi nahi tha message karna isne sahi nahi samjha kyonki isse laga pta nahi tu kiss haal mei hai kiske saath hai toh ye apna problem share karke tumhe aur pareshaan nahi karna chahti thi jab tera koi reply nahi aaya toh finally ye mere paas aai Maine isse vishwas dilaya ki mai Shambhal lunga Don't worry aur jab Maine blackmailer ko call kiya toh usne mera aur iska porn video banakar mujhe blackmail karne laga ye sab itna fast hua ki mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaya aur tu toh available tha hi nahi jab tu dikha to seedha Facebook live .
Rishabh realizes when girl entered she wanted to say something but rishabh silenced her she even hugged her despite last breath and rishabh shouts and runs towards dani from background a voice comes " mai tumhe life ke exam mei fail nahi hone dungi " -------
Black out
Artificial intelligence is dangerous
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